Talk:Icemen

VS Team "Funbari Onsen"
does anyone besides me think that this is written in a way that it is not of quality? I mean, its like a 3rd grader's idea of a summary. It drags out and goes too far into detail, as well as minor grammatical issues. I'm not saying that detail is a bad thing, but is "Faust was thrown into the air but stood up." really necessary? Waterga74 00:27, 29 March 2009 (UTC)